The definition seem to try and deliver two definition of the same thing, which is confusing, It both try and define Office Open XML as a special way to package files, and rendition, which imply behaviour.

Need clarification of definition

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Proposed Disposition of DIS 29500 Comment DK-0070 (Modified: 2008-01-04) Agreed; we will change the definition to read as follows: Office Open XML document — A package containing ZIP items as required by, and satisfying Parts 1 and 4 of, this Standard. A rendition of a data stream formatted using the wordprocessing, spreadsheet, or presentation ML and its related MLs as described in Parts 1 and 4 of this Standard. Such a document is represented as a package as described in Part 2 of this Standard . Similar Comments: FR-0007 , GB-0032 , KE-0077 , PT-0025 , US-0260