The graphic provided in the example is almost impossible to read, and includes malformed XML.
Proposed change: Make an easy to read example (perhaps lighter background color) and make the example well-formed.
8.3.4.1.1 [p455]
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Proposed Disposition of DIS 29500 Comment GB-0124 (Modified: 2008-01-02) Agreed; it should be noted that some XML fragments are intentionally incomplete and may not validate. Often the fragments will contain ellipses as placeholders allowing the focus to stay on the XML mark-up relevant to the example. A change will be made to Part 3, ยง8.3.4.1.1, page 456, line 1, where the artwork will be replaced by the following text: <extLst mod="true"> <ext uri="http://schemas.openformats.org/presentationml/someextensionpoint"> <new:foo xmlns:new= "http://schemas.openformats.org/presentationml/2008/presentationml"> … </new:foo> </ext> <ext uri="http://schemas.somevendor.com/presentationml/someextensionpoint"> <somevendor:bar xmlns:somevendor= "http://schemas.somevendor.com/V20/ournamespace"> … </somevendor:bar> </ext> … </extLst> Similar Comments: CA-0012 , CO-0075 , FR-0031 , US-0284
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